Art: Simultaneous Triptych

SimultaneousTriptych

This chapter art depicts two scenes from Instruction, although they happen at the same time.  I had originally planned to show three scenes, which is why the lines at the top of the picture go in a sawtooth pattern, but the last two simply folded together naturally.

This picture is the first time I’ve really used perspective, especially with how Angelica, Miss Karas, and Jessica all kind of line up.  However, I did not use a particularly mathematical method to find the perspective, and that sawtooth pattern predates my use, so the end result is really off.

I also let my ink brush get a little out of Karas’s shorts, so there’s a funny little black mark protruding out where her pocket would be.  I need to learn how to control my brush better.  But I also learned how to make a lighter line with my ballpoint while inking this picture.  I have a tendency to death-grip my tools, which leaves my fingers sore.  Learning how to press lighter will really help with that.

Occulted: Instruction

SimultaneousTriptychVanessa Griffin hesitated at her friend’s door.  Angelica was her friend, and it was normal for a girl to be worried about a friend that had been looking morose over the last week.  Vanessa wasn’t quite sure why she needed to tell herself that.  Perhaps it was because she was feeling guilty about not talking to her before.

“The door’s open, Van,” said Angelica’s voice from within the room.  Vanessa jumped.  As her heart rate returned to normal, she reached out and opened the door.  She stepped through the small TV room that every dorm room had, and walked over and pushed open the door to Angelica’s personal room.

Angelica was sitting in her bed, still wearing her pajamas.  Underneath the sleeping clothes, Vanessa saw hints of red and black sleeves and leggings.  A stranger would probably wonder why Angelica was wearing them, but Vanessa had spent enough time with her to know what they really were.

“H-hey, Angie.  How are you doing?”

Vanessa hated herself for how weak she sounded.  She hated only giving half an effort, and letting her fear and laziness getting the better of her.  She knew that it was her own fault that it took so long to actually do anything.  She wished she could be more like Angelica, who even sulked passionately.

“I’ve been getting better.  What took you so long to ask?”

Vanessa flinched.

“Hey, don’t worry about it.  I know how hard it is for you to talk.”

Vanessa felt her heart sink into her stomach.  “Well, can I at least do something to make you feel better?” she asked, as she walked over to the desk chair.

“I don’t know.  Maybe.  Do you even know what I feel bad about?”

“Well, I would guess that it’s because we still don’t know what happened to Dave and Johnny.  We didn’t really get a chance to ask that girl anything…”

Angelica shifted on the bed.  “No, it’s not quite that.  I mean, fucking up like that does suck, but the fact that the kid played us like that is even worse.”

“Well,” said Vanessa, “I suppose we could try getting revenge on him.”

“Good luck with that,” said Angelica, “we don’t even know where that fucker went to, and it’s not like we know how to trace him through a wormhole.”

“So, let’s learn.”

“How?”

Vanessa fell silent.  She looked down, ashamed.  She was useless again, not even being able to– No, no, find something that you can do!

“We can still find stuff on Dave and Johnny, can’t we?  We can still talk to that girl, right?”

Angelica looked up.  “Hey, you’re right.  It something better to do than just sitting around moping, anyway.”  Her arms and legs twisted and stretched.  They became long black and red tubes, snaking their way out of her clothes.  The limbs reached for the closet, and Angelica’s body slithered into a sleeveless hoodie and a denim skirt.

“Thanks, Van.  I feel much better now.”

Vanessa was so happy at being useful that she didn’t notice that Angelica had abandoned her in the room.


Inhale, exhale, inhale, exhale.

Sunlight streamed through the branches onto Jessica’s exhausted form.  She would have curled up in a dark corner somewhere else, but she was simply too tired.

“Done catching your breath, Iessica?”

The girl turned her head to look at her Latin teacher.  Miss Karas stood in the sunlight, dark hair shading the pale skin of her face, not bothered by it at all.  “Well, I suppose I can let you rest.  You’ve done your stretches, after all.”

Making an indistinct throat noise, Jessica threw herself into a sitting position.  The nickname, arising from a joke about how the Greeks and Romans pronounced letters, annoyed her today.  Actually, she was just in a bad mood.  “You,” Jessica gasped, “you, made me run around in the sun.  On a Saturday.”

“You asked me how I stay in shape.  You need to keep your aura as weak as possible during exercise to make sure you’re actually using your muscles, and not letting your magic do the work.”

Jessica’s breath began to even out.  “Why the hell am I even weak to the sun?  Why are we weak to anything?”

“Hm,” said Miss Karas.  “What do you know about why are we strong?  What gives one of us the power over the plants and the forests, when another Occ can transform themselves into a tea kettle, or other such things?”

“Dunno,” admitted Jessica, “My father told me that we have our own powers and Kryptonites.  I know that these can be passed down to children from their parents, but I never really thought about how.”

“Ah.”  The teacher sat down beside her student, helping the girl to sit up.  “Iessica, did your father ever mention ‘Forms?'”

“Like, the shape our auras take?”

“Not quite,” said Miss Karas, “The word I’m actually thinking of is eidos, which actually mostly means ‘kind of thing’ or ‘sort of thing.’  ‘Forms’ a traditional translation in the context of Plato, which is mostly where this vocabulary seems to come from.”

“We can keep calling them ‘ethos’ if you want.”

Karas blinked.  Apparently, Jessica had butchered the Greek language with a single word.  “Well, everyone winds up making up there own word for these things, so one person might know them as Forms, another group might call them Ideas, or Concepts, or Templates, or… whatever, never even minding the non-Western traditions.  Let’s call them ‘Ideas,’ they don’t actually have form after all.

“So each Occ can be said to possess Ideas within their auras, changing how the other Occulted perceive that aura and defining what abilities that you can use.  For example, your aura possesses the Ideas of ‘fang,’ allowing you to grow fangs, ‘blood,’ allowing you to safely suck blood and insure that your donor isn’t harmed beyond the blood loss, and ‘Jessica Albright,’ allowing you to heal quickly”

“Wait, what?” said Jessica.  “I’m an Idea?”

“Hm,” said the teacher, “well, we talk of the Ideas to explain why our powers are alike in someways and different in others.  Because the power to heal quickly is so widespread, I suspect that everybody innately possesses the Idea of themselves.  Now, possessing an Idea gives you power.  What can take that power away?”

Jessica took a moment to think, and said, “Possessing a different Idea.  I guess we could call the first kind of Idea an ‘Idea of power,’ and the second kind an ‘Idea of weakness.'”

“Very good,” said Miss Karas.

Jessica frowned.  “But that doesn’t explain why we have Ideas of weakness in the first place.”

“Ah, true.  All I know is that there are rituals to manipulate the Ideas in a person’s aura, but I’ve never tried it myself, and I’m given to understand that great danger accompanies these.  Perhaps the weaknesses can appear from there rituals?”

Jessica nodded.  A moment of silence passed between them, the sun drifting across the sky as wind blew across her skin.  “Hey, did you ever find anything out about those chaos people?”

“Maybe,” said Karas.  “Have you ever taken the Green line bus out to the edge of town?”

“Been meaning to,” said Jessica, “I’ve got a friend that works out there.  Why?”

“Because there’s someone I want to ask about things out there,” said Miss Karas, standing up.  “Would you like to come with?”

Jessica stomach growled.  “Can we have lunch first?”


Kayleigh stepped off the bus, into the outskirts of town.  She still wasn’t sure how she felt about the kid using Angelica as a patsy, on the one hand, it wasn’t like the blonde had ever done anything to earn Kayleigh’s sympathy, but on the other, it wasn’t like using her to sneak into somewhere he wasn’t wanted was completely ethical.

Well, it wasn’t like she really had anywhere else to go to learn about the magical world.  At least he had directed her to someone else, so she had sometime to clear her head over this.  It was sometime before she was expected to meet that person, however, so she decided to wander around a little.

There were a few buildings scattered around, Kayleigh had never really had a reason to visit them, mostly only coming out here to watch the fireworks in summer.  The view of the lake during the day was wonderful, making her wish she could paint just so that she could capture the feeling of the contrast of green and blue.  She took a picture, but it was a soulless thing.

There was a large glass structure, attached to a brick storefront.  Kayleigh had never realized that there was a greenhouse around here, but she had never come this way on her own before.  She decided to visit it, hoping to find something small she could carry back home with her.

Inside the store, flowers and seeds, ferns and reeds, spread out before her.  The array was baffling, not just in variety, but also in purpose.  It was like they sold anything, as long as it was a plant.  Curious, Kayleigh began to curl her fingers together.

“Love, honor, beauty, unite!”

The world exploded into color, the green of the plant life joined by the auras of the individual plants.  What the shapes and colors of those meant was unknown to Kayleigh, but what she could tell, was that nearly everything on sale had some kind of magical power.

As Kayleigh’s aura went back to sleep, one of the clerks approached her.  She had hazel eyes, shifting from brown to green as the light hitting them changed.  She was only a little taller than Kayleigh, tanned, and her hair was loose and…was it possible for hair to be hazel?

Anyway, she paused for a moment, seeing something she didn’t expect, but recovered and spoke, “Welcome, my name is Andria.  Are you looking for anything specific, or would you just like to browse around?”

Kayleigh leaned over to look as something on Andria’s apron.  “Your name tag says Alex.”

“They’re, both short for Alexandria.” she said, annoyed.  “Sometimes I’m one, sometimes I’m the other.”

“Oh,” said Kayleigh.  It was weird how she came up to her and started talking.  Don’t stores usually just let the customer’s look around for a while?  “So, uh, you working for commission, or something?”

Alexandria sighed.  “Yes, I am working for a commission.  Now could you please help me out and tell me what you’re looking for.”

“Who says I’m looking for anything, Miss Pushy?” said Kayleigh.  “For you know, I could just be looking around.”

“Oh, great so you’re just no.  No, Andria, you can’t lose your temper with the customers.”

Kayleigh had never seen someone slam the breaks on their emotions like that.  It almost seemed like she became a different person, more withdrawn and aloof from the world.  The visitor could almost see her eyes turn greener.

“Um, sorry, Andria?”

“It’s Alex, right now.”

“Oh.  Um, sorry for just wandering in here?”  It felt weird to be apologizing for not wanting anything.

“It’s fine.  We-I’m just eager to make my first sale, is all.”  The clerk brushed herself down.  “Look, if I saw what I think I did earlier, you understand what I mean when I say that we have some special plant for sale, yeah?”

“Um, yes.  Well, I think I should learn a bit more about these things, before I go playing around by myself.”

Nodding, the clerk let her customer go.


An incessant whine of machinery echoed from within the building.  The brick walls quieted it, but like the smell of the smoke, it surrounded the building, echoing out the back and polluting the outside with its ugliness.  “We aren’t going to have to listen to that while we’re asking questions, are we?” asked Jessica.

“What, the hydraulics?” said Karas, “No, we aren’t going to try to yell over a decibel level that can leave people deaf.”  She moved to enter the building, going through the door underneath the sign proudly declaring the entrance to ‘Caulwell’s Forge,’ and clearly expected her student to follow.

The inside was a well-kept reception spaces, although empty for the weekend.  The door was flanked, on either side, by two chairs and a reading table, presumably so visitor’s could rest their feet while they waited.  Behind the counter were two doors, and judging by the muffled buzzing and occasional ring of metal on metal coming from behind one, it probably lead to the forge proper.

A large man stepped out from behind the other door.  The oddest thing about him was, easily, that he was wearing a welding mask for no apparent reason.  Jessica would have wondered what he was wearing a mask for, but quickly, she began to suspect that there was Nothing beneath it, just like that kid from the bookstore.

“Ah, Fivi,” said the man, with a low, resonating baritone, “you’ve caught me at an awkward time.  I have to be on my way to another appointment.”

“Oh, don’t worry, this will only take a moment of your time,” said Miss Karas.  “I’m wondering if you could tell me anything about an organization called ‘Tohu wa-Bohu.'”

The man stopped.  Slowly, he walked up to the teacher, leaning in close to her, visor to eyeball.  “I’m afriad, Miss Karas,” he said, “that I have never heard of such a thing.”

Miss Karas took a step back.  “Ah, well,” she said, “perhaps you could tell me about a certain child?  About ten years old, likes to wear a rubber mask and play around with a puzzle box?”

The man seemed to blink behind his mask.  “Well, I’m not going to say I don’t know anything about him,” he said, “but I’m surprised that you haven’t met him already.  And while you have every right to make your inquiries, I’m not sure you should be bringing one of your students along with you.”  He looked at Jessica, pointedly.

“Don’t misunderstand, I’m not bringing her into this, it’s the other way around.”  The man’s expression was unreadable, thanks to his damned welding mask.  “Regardless, it seems that you don’t wish to speak of this, so we’ll leave you to your other meeting.”

As they left the building and the mechanical whine once again assaulted Jessica’s ears, she asked her teacher, “What was that all about?”

Without looking back to her student, Miss Karas replied, “Did you notice that star made of arrows in the corner of the sign?”

Jessica looked over her shoulder, and sure enough, in the bottom-right corner of the sign, there were eight arrows, arranged into a star.  “I do now.  What does that mean?”

“Modern fiction has given it a meaning of chaos, anything goes, everything allowed to go in every direction.  But historically, such symbols have had a different meaning, especially among the Occulted: all things, emerging from a single point.”

“The origin of the universe, tohu wa-bohu.

“Correct,” Karas smiled to her student, “now that you’ve identified the symbol, what can you do with that information?”

Jessica spun around to look at her teacher, and held her chin.  “Well, one reason you would display a symbol like that is to declare yourself an ally of someone, without just coming out and saying it.  If we look around, there might be other companies with it in their logos.  We might find someone willing to talk there…”

Jessica stopped, and squinted into the distance.  She thought she had seen a flash of red and black, like an aura, throw itself over the barbed wire above the fence of Caulwell’s Forge.  “Was that Angelica Spritz?”

Karas turned around to follow Jessica’s gaze, and furrowed her eyebrow.  “That’s right, her grounding ended to day, didn’t it?”


Kayleigh found herself at the back of the building.  Enormous blue dumpsters, so tall that the girl wasn’t even sure anyone alive could see over the top, stood near the chainlink gate, where she had been told to wait.

“Out there, on the edge of town, there’s a place called Caulwell’s Forge.  I know the man that owns and runs the place, I’ve even collaborated with him on some, but not all, of my greater works.  You should meet with him, I can arrange it for you.  He’ll want too meet with you behind his property, he doesn’t like it when non-customers use the front door.  Look for the sign of the many-pointed star.”

Kayleigh stood there, listening to the whine of the machinery and smelling the residue of the smoke drifting from the chimneys and garage doors in the back of the building.  What did they make?  Were all of their customers Occulted or did they also do jobs for normal people that just happened to find them?

Suddenly, somebody was behind Kayleigh.  Surprised, she spun around to look at a large man, wearing heavy work clothes and a welding mask over his face, standing a fair bit away and staring at her.  “You’re– you know that kid that hangs out in that gap at the mall, right?  The one you have to be Occulted to find?”

“I do,” said the man, “and I assume that you are Kayleigh?  That’s the name of the person he said he was sending to me.”

“Yes.”

The man nodded.  “Allow me to introduce myself.  My name is Caulwell, although you may have heard of me under the overly flattering title ‘Lord of the Blacksmiths’ – something other people decided to call me, I assure you – and I am given to understand that you have questions for me, about magic and our fellowship?”

“Well, I haven’t been asking as many questions as I should have,” said the girl.  “Hell, I haven’t even asked the kid his name.”

“I believe that it is ‘Malcolm,'” said the smith.  “I forget his surname at the moment, but I do know that he is also called, for rather complicated reasons that I don’t fully understand, the ‘Child of All Ages.’  Hasn’t he volunteered any information?”

“Well, we went over the distinction between superpowers and spells,” said Kayleigh.  “We were about to go into Metaphors and Ideas, but…things kind of happened.”

“What has that fool doing?” Caulwell asked no one in particular.  “These Metaphors and Ideas, what did he explain about them?”

“Not much,” said Kayleigh.  “I know that they have something to do with spells, and Ideas can be put into an object’s aura, but I didn’t really get it then, either.  Why do you want to know?”

“Learning about magic,” said the man in the welder’s mask, “isn’t something that should be done recklessly.  Just like you haven’t told anyone about magic, there are other kinds of knowledge that can change a person, and not all of them are as gentle as that.”


Angelica shimmied open the window, and slithered her arm in.  Good thing the Idea of Tentacles comes with a side order of bonelessness.  Carefully unlatching the window, she lifted herself through, and found herself in an office, with books on the shelves and a computer on the desk.

She had been lucky to find somewhere displaying the many-pointed star.  The kid had let slip that it was a symbol that the sorcerers used to invite conversation with the Occulted without having to actually say anything.  If she poked around in here, she might actually find out what that kid was up to.  Looking around, Angelica sized up the best place to look.  He wouldn’t keep what I’m looking for on his computer, he wouldn’t want to destroy anything.

The books would probably be more productive.  She had to be careful, though, a sorcerer’s books were not something for the uninitiated.  She would be fine, though, her Gran had been teaching her about magic since she was six.  Gran had also been trying to teach how to be a good person, but those parts of the lessons never really seemed to stick.

As she reached up to pull out a book, she began to do the exercise Gran had taught her, to make her mind ready to receive information.  She envisioned her mind spreading, loosening and preparing to have things pushed into it.  My mind is open, open to the world, my eyes are open, I see the world, my mind accepts the world, the world is as it is, I see the world as it is, my mind is open…

It was fortunate that she was prepared to let things in.  At the turning of a page, the knowledge of the book leapt on to her, wrapping itself around her and forcing itself onto her.  Angelica expanded around it, a pleasant feeling of fullness spreading through her, a fire consuming her and changing her, forcing her to acknowledge it, and denying her ability to decide what was true.

“Miss Spritz,” said a voice at the door, “I’m sure you realize that breaking and entering is a crime.”


“What…what is that like?”

“It’s like having a part of your mind being pulled out of you, getting turned around, and jammed back in.  The overall experience is…unpleasant.”  Caulwell rubbed the back of his head.  “Nobody comes back from that completely unchanged, and the lucky ones don’t have to deal with knowing two contradictory things at once afterward.”

“How is that even possible?” said Kayleigh.  “I mean, how do you even find this stuff?”

“Books, pictures, I glimpsed something in an old piece of iron once.  I trust you begin to grasp how fortunate we are for such things to be hidden from the Surface world.”

Kayleigh shuddered.  The thought of her friends getting their minds twisted around like that…  “How can I avoid…things like that.”

“First, perform your own experiments,” said the smith, “second, if you must look for information beyond yourself, do so from someone you can actually talk to, preferably in person.  They’ll have an easier time judging if you can handle it.”

“Alright, what if you don’t know how to experiment?”

The man tilted his head.  “You mean like you don’t know where to start?  Well, awaken your aura for me.”

Obeying, the girl curled her fingers together.  “Love, honor, beauty, unite!”  She looked up, seeing the auras of the world.  Flashes of light appeared behind Caulwell, like the sparks off a hot piece of iron, being pounded into shape.  “Ah, you have a smithing Idea in your aura, don’t you?”


Angelica’s aura made Jessica uneasy.  It was red and black, the same as before, but it had been steady, the checkerboard pattern slowly expanding and retracting through the moments of time.  Now, ripples had appeared before it, a buzzing like soundwaves traveling across the image, like sound through the air.

Angelica started to make nonsense sounds.  There was rhythm and a melody to them, almost like scatting but with the syllables flowing into each other like hisses, the tones clashing against each other like rocks.  Trying to reach out to the blonde, Jessica found that she could not move.  The song had paralyzed her.

“Goddamn, just learning how to do that would have made the trip worth it, never mind the other stuff I’ll find.”  Silently, Angelica prowled towards the women.  Her smug gait brought her to the space between them, where she looked over them, admiring they’re helplessness.

“Spritz, did you learn this just from looking at that book?” asked Miss Karas.

“Yeah, the having the information shove itself into my was fun.”

“Oh? Most accounts use words like ‘violating’ or ‘horrifying.'”

“There are ways to prepare yourself for it.  Seems like it feels good if you are,” said the blonde.  Jessica strained against her paralysis, trying to move her body through sheer force of will.  And it was working.

As Angelica passed in front of Jessica, the pale girl grabbed at the black-and-red clad arm, holding it, trying to tear it off.  Frightened, Angelica made those dissonant, syllabant sounds again, forcing Jessica’s hand back to her side.

“I’ve heard you had experience with mind control.  I shouldn’t be surprised you have an easier time resisting mine,” said Angelica to herself.


Kayleigh’s aura fell back asleep, and the sparks behind Caulwell faded.  “That was it?” he asked.

“What was it?”

“Your aura only lasted for a few seconds.”  Caulwell walked up to Kayleigh, looking her over.  “What have you been using it for?”

“Not much,” admitted Kayleigh, “I’ve mostly been doing it to look at the pretty pictures that appear around people.”

“So your Reservoir should be completely full,” said Caulwell.

“My what?”

“The reserve of magical power that the Occulted draw from to use their powers, either instinctively or through ritual.  It’s filled by certain actions, depending on who it belongs to, from staying up late to deliberately making people suffer.”


Angelica sang her prisoners out of the building.  Their suffering, annoyance from being out done and fear of what Angelica would do with them next, was delicious.  Her parents always told her off for farming, always telling her that there was enough suffering in the world to keep her Reservoir full, but honestly, just looking for miserable people wasn’t any fun.

Once they had gotten out of the building, she made her prisoners turn around and look at her.  “Now, what am I going to do with you.  Any suggestions?”

“If you let us go now,” said the teacher – Ms. Karas, wasn’t it? – taking advantage of the prompt, “you could get off easy.  Just finding a new toy and trying it out, and nobody got harmed.  And besides, it’s not like you can keep this up forever.”

Oh?  Hasn’t she looked up how I feed?  Although there were other reasons she would have to stop at some point: her throat getting sore, breaking her prisoners completely, needing to go do something else- Oh yeah, that reminds me.

“Hey, Jessie,” she said, “what happened to Dave and Johnny?”

“The goblin and the giant?  Well, Dave wound up making some kind of deal with…some kind of entity, and he got fused with a spider, and started ranting about killing all of the normals.  Johnny got kidnapped by Dave, and I have no idea where they are now.”

It seemed that Jessica didn’t know anything, but that was about what she expected.  Shepherding her captives down the street, Angelica thought about how surprisingly willing Jessica was to ask for help.  I had her pegged as the kind that would be too proud to ask anything from anyone.  She also didn’t realize that Jessica was quite so powerful by herself, which would mean that she didn’t need to prove anything.

Now, however, Angelica was screwing with the leech more out of her own pride than anything.  Seeing a bridge over a shallow stream, the blonde decided to try an experiment with Jessica.  Vampires were supposed to be unable to cross running water, after all.


“Okay, if pretty much everything can fill my Reservoir, my aura should be going just constantly, right?”

“I’m afraid it’s not that simple,” said Caulwell.  “For one thing, your Reservoir can only hold so much power.  For another, more relevant in your case, is that your aura can only produce so much Pressure.”

“So Pressure is what, how much power I can put out at a time?”

“Roughly,” said the smith.  “Everything is mediated through the Ideas, but in general, the fewer ways you can fill your Reservoir, the more Pressure you can put out.”


Once again, Jessica found herself wondering why she had to have Ideas of weakness.  The water was twenty feet beneath her, but it was running fast, and with her head hanging over the side of the bridge, her head was swimming, like motion sickness.  At least there’s no one else around, thought Jessica.  And if I do vomit, it will be taken downstream.

That blonde bitch was giggling.  Jessica tried to tear her eyes away from the stream, and she succeeded, a little, but only enough to see Angelica force the teacher onto the bridge.  This was enough to see that she was distracted.

It was an opportunity.  Jessica pushed, sending out her aura as hard and as fast as she could, not trying to create a physical effect, but simply creating a vast jet of magenta above her.

Eventually she stopped, unable to risk spending any more blood than she already had.  Her face turned toward Angelica.

“What did you just do?” asked the captor.

Jessica chuckled.  “Come on, can’t you tell?”  Angelica shoved her over the water once more.


“Although in your case, I think it has more to do with the pumps needing some oil after being left untended, so to speak.”

“So my aura is weak because I’ve lived my life un-Occulted,” said Kayleigh.  “Is there some kind of exercise I can do to strengthen it?”

“There are somethings that only you can discover, I’m afraid.  But,” said the man, “what was that mantra you used?  ‘Love, honor, beauty?’  I think you might already have an affinity for those Ideas.”

Kayleigh sucked in her lip.  “You’re just guessing, aren’t you?”

“It’s an educated guess,” said Caulwell.  “But at any rate, it’s somewhere to start.  Can you think of anything that could be affected by any of those Ideas, safely?”

Thinking back to where else she’d been that day, the girl said, “Flowers.”


Alexandria stared at where the geyser of aura had been.

“Hey, Alex,” asked Andria, “That was Jessica, wasn’t it?  Do you think she needs help?”

Getting a nod from her other self, Andria went to help her friend, before getting redirected to ask her boss for a break.


“Just so,” said the smith.  “Now think of a spell that could affect them, and cast it.”

“Um, Mr. Caulwell?” said Kayleigh, “I don’t know how to cast spells.”

“Really,” said the man.  “Well, sorcery is a bit like a language: there are a lot of ways to say something, and everyone uses a different one, but as long as they’re understood, it’s fine.  As for actually creating a spell, think of a Metaphor – objects and actions that make sense to you – and Fill them with your aura.”

“And what does a Metaphor do, exactly?”

“Hmm, how do I put this…Well, I suppose it something to make you think of the right Idea.  Aura is a tempestuous thing, not readily controlled by the conscious mind.  Instead, most have to use something, either their instincts or a Metaphor, to make sure that they are invoking the correct Idea.”

“So a Metaphor is something that brings an Idea to mind?”

“Just so.”

Kayleigh smiled, and wondered if that Alex girl was still working.  She was going to need to buy something from there, and it seemed like she could have used a bit of luck that day.


“What’s going on here?” asked Alexandria.  They were wondering why the Latin teacher was holding Jessica off the side of the of the bridge, dangling her over a shallow river that would probably kill her if she fell.  The probable answer to that question – Angelica Spritz, judging by the blonde spiky hair – simply turned to the newcomer, and sang a song to ensnare her too.  Big mistake.

The girl didn’t stop moving, not like the song commanded her to.  Instead, her head swayed a bit, like she was dizzy or sick, and her hair turned a definite brown.

“What the fuck?” said Andria, jumping at the blonde.  As she sailed through the air, her fist became covered in rock, which then slammed into Angelica’s rather surprised face.  The girls rolled across the bridge, the music stopping, and giving Miss Karas a chance to pull Jessica back over the railing.

Andria stood back up, and Angelica looked at her.  “You little shit,” the blonde said, rubbing her face.  Her arm became a tentacle, stretching out and wrapping around Andria’s neck.  Unfortunately for her, that neck also belonged to Alex, and just like the brown-eyed girl had the power of the earth, the green-eyed had power of wood.

Branches and thorns tore through the limb, leaving a tattered mess of red and black.  Annoyed, the blonde threw herself at the short girl, butting her in the head, kneeing her in the stomach, and using her other limb to constrain and strangle Alexandria.  They summoned their strengths to fight back, sticks of straggly wood and skin-covering rock lashing out and protecting, giving them enough time to start throwing punches into Angelica’s gut.

Someone grabbed Andria’s elbow, stopping from throwing any more punches.  Alex looked back, showing them both the face of Miss Karas.

“One more,” she said.


The old smith watched the girl leave, without having said a word about Tohu wa-Bohu.  As dangerously uninquisitive as she proved to be, it wasn’t nearly as disturbing as the Child of All Ages seemingly abdicating his duty to teach her.

It was his plan that would put her in danger when the time came.  The idea that he would just use someone as a sacrifice was disturbing.  There was nothing to do but to ask the Child himself about his plan, for he alone knew that answer to that question.


Miss Karas dragged the gagged Angelica down the sidewalk.  Jessica had tired of laughing at the sight, so the four of them – Jessica, Miss Karas, Angelica, and the twins – were walking together for the moment.  As they passed the greenhouse, Alex turned to the teacher and said, “Well, I should be getting back to work now.”

“Wait,” said Miss Karas.  “How did you break the enchantment?”

Alex fidgeted, and looked away.  “Well, um, I guess you could say I have multiple personalities?  Well, it’s not like we forget what happens when the other one is doing things, and our thought overlap, I mean, we think the same things sometimes, not like two people thinking the same thing, I mean that it’s like we’re share a brain, which is actually what’s happening.  I guess the easiest way to think about it is, Alex and Andria are two parts of Alexandria, but we aren’t distinct parts, if that makes any sense?”

Karas blinked.  “Well, okay then.”

“What, you don’t even have a guess at that?” asked Jessica,  “Like, how that even happens, or something?”

Karas looked at her student, and sighed.  “I’m sorry, Jess.  There are some questions nobody knows the answer to.”

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This chapters even longer than the first attempt, but without Kayleigh’s part it would have been much shorter.  It’s also a lot more complicated than the first attempt, with the intercutting of Kayleigh getting exposition and the fight with Angelica.  The fight is a little flat, but this chapter is long enough as is and I’m kind of sick of writing it.

Occulted: Instigation

Nunc vos libero.”

“Now I free you.”

“Yeah, the teachers have something to do this afternoon, so get out of here.”

Jessica was surprised by how fast class had gone. She had known that class would end early that day, but she still thought that time shouldn’t have passed so quickly.  Then again, worrying about that she fed blood to while also trying to pay attention in class had taken up a lot of time.

As the student’s began to pack up their things and leave, Jessica found herself ogling her Latin teacher.  Miss Karas was a beautiful women, with marble-smooth skin and black, black hair, and a body she clearly spent hours every week taking care of.  So distracted, Jessica had to hurry to gather her things.In her rush, she let a piece of paper fall from her desk, and she watched as went under the teacher’s.

The teacher’s desk was a heavy, metal thing, and the part the paper fell under was barely an inch off the ground.  With a quick look around the room, Jessica saw that it was empty, the other students eager to use the long afternoon to goof off.  Even Miss Karas had left, but Jessica had no idea where to.

“Well, if I’m the only one that will see it…”

Jessica stooped down, and grabbed a lower edge of the teacher’s desk.  Her aura flaring around her, she lifted it, careful not to let anything slide off the top as she reached down beneath and retrieved her paper.  Setting the desk where it had been, Jessica stood up, and saw that Miss Karas had been watching use her power.

“Well, this is embarrassing,” said Jessica with a blush.

Karas made a small smile.  “Don’t be to embarrassed, Jessica.  This isn’t the first time I’ve walked in on a vampire using her power.  Just be more careful the next time you do something like this, okay?”

With a quick, silent nod, Jessica brushed off her school uniform, and rushed out of the classroom.


“So, that’s what happened just now.”

Jessica was leaving the school building with her roommate Emily. Jessica had been reluctant to step out into the bright afternoon sun.  She had never been good with sunlight, her almost pale skin had always burned easily, and her ears tended to stick out from under her hair.  But with no real reason to stay after school, the two of them made their way down the front steps.

Well, it happens,” said Emily.  “Everybody’s expecting to see weird shit around here, anyway, so they’re more on edge about these things.”

“And people can detect aura around here,” added Jessica.  “But, it could have been worse.  It’s not like I got attacked by birds.”

Emily smiled and shrugged, deforming the wounds on her face.  “Don’ worry ’bout it.  ‘S just the price of trespassin’ on the divine.”

Fearing that the conversation was veering of into the theological, and already aware of the bad luck of Emily’s family, Jessica decided to change the subject.  “Well, we both have things we want to get our minds off of, so let’s go to the mall.”

Emily raised an eyebrow.  “Tryin’ to find that girl again?”

Jessica’s smile dropped.  “What’s happening to her is my fault.  Somebody should explain things to her, and I don’t want to incriminate myself…”

Emily nodded.  “True.  It’s somethin’ you should deal with now rather than later.  Even if it does keep you from makin’ time with that boy from English.”

Jessica laughed.  “Well that’s fine.  I’ll just sleep with both of them!”

Emily chuckled herself.  “Well, if ya think you can swing it.”

“Alright, let’s get going to the mall!” said Jessica, as she turned and broke away from the stream of students heading for the gate.

“Uh, Jessie, the mall’s offa school grounds.”

“I know; my feet are moving on their own.”

Jessica walked off through the school’s yard.  Her feet tried to keep her in the shadow of the scattered trees, she was relieved to find, but the girl had to wonder why she was being taken around the school building, and what she was being taken for.

Emily chased after her auto-ambulatory friend.  “Hey, are ya being moved, I mean, is somethin’ pushin’ on ya, or is this under yer own power, you know, like yer muscles are jus’ contractin’ automatically?”

“Uh,” said Jessica, “it feels like my legs have been highjacked and my muscles are being forced to move them, yeah.”

Emily nodded.  “Alright, let’s try this.”  Emily got in front of Jessica, and threw the vampire over her shoulder.  She was a tall girl, and she could easily keep a hold on Jessica’s body until it stopped struggling.  “Jess, are you alright now?”

“Not really.  I can’t seem to move my arms or legs,” said Jessica.  Grumbling, Emily started to carry her back towards the main path, but when they crossed through the shadow of a tree, Jessica’s arms turned and pulled Emily’s nearly out of their sockets.

“AAAAAHHH!”

“Emily!  Are you going to be alright?” asked Jessica, as she tumbled out of her roommate’s arms.

Emily tried to move her fingers.  “Eventually, I think.  Ain’t gonna be able to lift anythin’ today, though.”

“I’m so sorry,” said Jessica, tears welling up in her eyes as she was forced to continue on to wherever her feet were taking her.  Emily followed, apparently more worried about her friend than her arms.

Eventually, the two girls made their way around to the back of the main school building, where a cellar door lead into the ground below.  Jessica’s hand tried to open the door, but it seemed to be locked.  She found her eyes looking for something, even having her tears forcibly stopped by…something.  What the hell, she thought, is happening to me?

“Jessie,” shouted Emily, “what’s going on now?”

“I, I don’t know,” said Jessica, “it’s looking for something.”

“What’s lookin’?”

“Whatever’s controlling me.”  Jessica’s head stopped, and she didn’t know why.  Her body moved over to a tree, and picked up a large heavy rock that was laying beside it.  Emily scuttled out of Jessica’s line of sight, her eyes wide with fear.  Carefully staying in the shade of the tree, Jessica’s body threw the rock at the cellar door, breaking it down and sending the stone tumbling down the stairs beyond it.

“Why didn’t you–uh, your body jus’ punch the door open?” asked Emily.

“Probably because I still lose my strength in direct sunlight,” said Jessica, as her body went down the stairs.  Her eyes adjusted to the gloom quickly.  Around her, it was like a boiler room had expanded into a universe.  All around her, metal pipes ran from floor to ceiling, some branching off and some connecting to each other, and Jessica could not see the walls of the room in any direction.  Electric lights ran along the the ceiling, making a pattern on the glossy cement below her.  The only break from the endless expanse of pipes and lighting was some kind of thick black cylinder, punch up through the floor and the ceiling.  Taking a chance to look over her shoulder, Jessica saw that Emily was chasing after her, arms uselessly dangling beside her, and that there was still light streaming down stairs behind her.  Jessica’s head was force to look forward, and around the side of the black cylinder, she saw a young woman with pale skin and dark, dark hair.

“Jessica?” asked Miss Karas, “What are you doing here?”

“I don’t know,” said Jessica.  As Jessica’s body rounded the cylinder, she found a door in the side of it.  Between the Gothic arch of the frame and the intricate carving on the surface, Jessica was reminded of a church.  It seemed to be the only opening in the black stone.  As her hand moved to open the door, Miss Karas grabbed at Jessica’s wrist.  “Stop!”  Jessica’s body tried to shove her teacher away, but somehow, Miss Karas leaned away just far enough that her leg could stick out and pull Jessica off her feet.  Jessica’s hand stuck out beneath her, and caught her fall.  Jessica felt her body’s momentum swing her feet up, and her leg moving around to kick the teacher in the head, but the foot sailed through the air, letting Jessica’s body flip over and land on her back.  Miss Karas pinned Jessica to the ground and said, “Alright, now will you please tell me what’s happening?”

“My-my body’s moving on its own,” Jessica began, before her arms lifted her up and took Miss Karas with her.  The teacher managed to land on both feet, but her student’s body turned and moved in to strike her.  Jessica didn’t feel her fists hit anything but air, Miss Karas deflecting her at the forearms as streams of aura sailed past her into the air.  Jessica found herself staring into Karas’s black eyes and saying, “Don’t interfere with this girl’s actions.”

Miss Karas backed away, like her body moved on its own.  Jessica heard the teacher turn to ask an explanation from her roommate as her body moved to the church-like door.  It was locked, but with a flare of aura, Jessica’s fist smashed the door open.

Inside, a chamber was filled by the sickening smell of incense.  In the middle of the room, a stone box lay, filled with some kind of gray sludge.  To the left side of the box, the geometry teacher stood, his eyes turned upward as if in a trance, while to the right, the principal looked downward, praying and muttering to himself.  Around them, a strange green light emanated from the ground, and other things stood at the walls of the chamber, a giant, three-headed snake on one side, a gigantic head with a gaping mouth on another, a bird, a child, other, much stranger things, chanting, screaming, swaying.  Jessica could feel the holiness of the scene before her, denying access to the profane.  This, it seemed, was the end of her journey, with whatever was controlling her body not allowing her to trespass on the divine.

But at that thought, Jessica found herself turning, taking away her hope to regain control of her body.  Instead, she found herself walking up to Emily, who was still talking to Miss Karas.  “Jessie, wha-”  Jessica’s arms picked up Emily, and carried her to the door.  Miss Karas just stood there and watched.  “Jessie, what the hell you doin’!?”  Jessica felt Emily struggle against her, kicks landing on her body, but unable to punch through her aura.

“Emily, I’m sorry, I can’t-”  Jessica’s body stopped in front of the chamber door.  Her arms shifted Emily around.  Carefully shifting it’s weight, Jessica’s body pulled back Emily’s, and threw her into the room.  “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!”  Emily sailed through the air, and eventually stopped when she flew into the stone box in the middle of the ritual.  The box tipped over onto its side, the gray sludge it held falling out and spreading across the chamber floor.  The chanting stopped.  The motion stopped.  Even the feeling of holiness stopped, like even whatever god was there was as shocked by the interruption as the others in the room.  After a few seconds of still silence, the principal finally turned to Jessica and said, “Do you have any idea what you’ve just done?”

“No,” said Jessica, “I don’t have the slightest idea.”


Kayleigh sighed and stretched.  The sound of the fountain’s water bubbled behind her.  She felt weird about leaving her friends behind to go to the mall by herself, but she had to meet that girl again, to ask her about magic.  There was something in Kayleigh’s head stopping her from talking about it, like there was a wall between the normal world and the magical one.  And for someone like Milly, to know a secret she couldn’t talk to anyone about would destroy her.  At least, that’s what Kayleigh told herself.

As Kayleigh scanned the crowd, she once again kicked herself for not getting Jessica’s number.  Or a picture, or even her last name.  She had looked around online, but that had been no help.  Apparently, the Occulted keeping to themselves even extended to the internet.

Eventually, Kayleigh got bored and simply sat on the edge of the fountain.  The sound of water flowing was rather soothing, and eventually, the chatter around her became a singular haze of words.  The world began to slow to nothing, and as it did Kayleigh felt her consciousness expand.

This was something that had been happening since that day.  Learning about magic, it seemed, had some odd effects by itself.  Not only had her mind been doing this weird crap, Kayleigh had found herself talking less, simply sitting there and contemplating her hand, or something.  Milly had noticed.  All the more reason to find Jessica again, and soon.

Suddenly, Kayleigh heard yelling.  “Goddammit, asshole!  What the hell is different now?”  Feeling a vague, thick-headed curiousness, she looked around for the source, and found it in a small hallway, between two stores that shared a wall.

“Nothing for it.  I’ll try it again.”  There was only a kid in the hallway.  He was crouched over something, it looked like one of those gyroscope things.  The kid set the gyroscope on the ground and made it spin, like a top.  As it wobbled on its base, the object began to glow, like it was hot, rather than like it had lights on it, or anything.  It spun, wobbled, and glowed for a second or two, until it shattered, sending shards of itself all around.  The kid didn’t seem hurt, or even surprised.  Instead, he simply sighed, and stood up, stretching, to look around.  “Oh.  You can be in here.”

Kayleigh looked around, and realized that the kid was talking to her.  It seemed that she had stumbled into the wall/gap.  Kayleigh looked back at the kid.  A boy, about ten years old judging by his height, wearing a powder blue sweatshirt, with the hood up.  He wore gloves, not winter ones, but thin ones, the kind that let the knuckles show through them.  The gloves weren’t the weird thing about him, though.  The weird thing about him was that he was wearing this expressionless, rubber mask, like from a bad Halloween costume.  The mask hid his face well, though, even his eyes were lost in shadow.

“Yeah.  I guess I can.  Is that weird?”

“Hmm.”  The kid walked up to the teenager, looking at something that wasn’t there, but was there.  “Yeah, no doubt about it.  Your aura is completely inert.”

Before Kayleigh could ask what that meant, the kid was talking again.  “Tell me, have you ever been in a space like this before?”

“A space…?”  Kayleigh moved her eyes from side to side, thinking.  “Well, there was this one time I got warped this weird version of the mall.  I was hanging out with a vampire, and we got into a fight with another girl from her school.”

“When you say ‘her school,’ you mean Darkwood Academy, right?”

“Yeah.”  There were only two high schools in town, and only one of them was filled with monsters.

“I see.  Did you ingest anything while you were there?”

“Ingest?”

“Eat.  Or drink.  Did anything go into your mouth?”

“Not really,” said Kayleigh.  “Are, are you trying to find out some kind of magic thing?”

The kid stopped short.  “What?”

“Like, are you trying to figure out what kind of magic I got?  I mean, I haven’t been able to do anything, but it seems like the kind of thing that would be good to know.”

The kid tapped hid front fingers together.  “Would you like to learn?  Magic, I mean.”

“Um, well…” Kayleigh began.  “I guess, it would be a bit of a waste if I didn’t, wouldn’t it?  I mean, I’ve stumbled into this huge secret world that the world doesn’t know about, so I might as well explore it, right?”

“And?”

Kayleigh blinked.  “And…I really want to be able to talk to someone about this.”

The kid nodded.  “Very well then.  What are the three most important things in life?”

“…What?”

“Humor the mysterious entity that knows about magic, would you?”

Kayleigh shrugged, and looked inward.  What were the three most important things to her?  As she turned the question over in her head, she felt her consciousness expand once more.  The first things she went to were her friends and family, but there were too many of them to choose just three.  So, she decided that the most important thing to her was the thing that connected them to her, and her to them.

“Love.”

Kayleigh palmed the first finger of her right hand.  What was the second most important thing in her life?  The first was the people inside of it.  The second would be living a life that would make them happy, without ever disappointing them.

“Honor.”

Kayleigh brought the middle finger of her right hand to her palm.  With the first two things down, Kayleigh found herself scrambling for the third.  The first two things were the people in her life, and being able do right by them.  Could the third thing be something just for herself?  It would be the thing she found herself thinking about, when she had time for herself.

“Beauty.”

Kayleigh brought her right thumb over the the tips of her first two fingers.  Now that she knew what the three most important things in life were, all that was left was to bring them together.

“Unite!”

Kayleigh turned her right hand into a fist, and she saw the world anew.  A blue-green light suffused the hallway, sun and shadow turned alien and sublime.  She looked down at the kid, and saw a similar blue-green surrounding him, with black marks streaked through it, like a clock face.

“Congratulations, wall walker.  Your intuition has allowed you to see both sides of it.  Turn around now, and see how the first side looks with your new knowledge.”

The girl looked out of the hallway, and saw the world she knew.  It wasn’t quite different, the crowd was still the crowd, and the shops were still shops.  But, there was something around every object out there, like the light in the hall and the image around the kid, lying inert, with only the potential to grow into something like Kayleigh’s pink aura.  As she stared at the transparent invisibilities surrounding everything in the mundane world, she was attacked by something with too many mouths.

Sharp teeth and claws tore at Kayleigh’s skin.  Blindly, she grabbed at whatever it was that was attacking her, trying to push it away, but one of the mouths shot out from it, biting into Kayleigh’s face, just above her eye.

Suddenly, the thing vanished, along with the blue-green light and the inert auras of the outside world.  Kayleigh shook her head to clear it, reaching up to her forehead to stop the blood.

“It’s not a spirit, but it appears as a spirit.”  Kayleigh looked over to the kid’s mutter, watching him struggle with something she couldn’t see.  Oddly, the kid was simply standing there, like nothing unusual was happening to him.  Finally blinking away the blood from her eye, Kayleigh said, “What, what just attacked me?”

“Sorry,” said the kid, “I don’t have the slightest idea.”

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The true rewrite starts now.  I’m actually mostly happy with Jessica’s part of the story, so all I had to do there was clean up the Latin, and move things around to characterize Jessica a bit better.  Kayleigh’s part is totally new, of course, and I’m really happy that I managed to end it with the same line as Jessica’s.  Makes them feel connected, rather than just happening to be taking place at the same time.

I’m going to be back on twelve-hour days when this is posted, and I really want to think about the next chapter’s role in the overall story, so don’t be surprised if it takes a while for me to continue the story.

Occulted: Initiation

She was artificially beautiful.  Modifying a photograph to remove the flaws of the subject was a practice as old as photography itself, but did ‘artificial’ mean ‘fake?’  Art itself is the creation of human hands, and it is, in many ways, the process by which civilization comes to define beauty.  But there was no beautiful work of art that ignored its medium.  And if her face could be considered part of the picture’s medium, would the image manipulation be ignoring it?

“Ogling pictures of pretty women again, Kayleigh?”

Kayleigh sputtered and turned around to her pig-tailed friend.  “Milly, I was just– I mean, I was contemplating beauty…”

“Oh?  Is that something you do often?”  Linda towered over Milly, her orange, almost yellow skin contrasting with Milly’s brown.  Ziggy, shorter than either, poked her head around Linda.

“It’s something she’s been doing since seventh grade,” said Milly.  “She’d catch sight of a pretty woman, start undressing her with her eyes, and say she was contemplating beauty to cover it up.”

“Stop making me sound like a closeted lesbian, Milly,” said Kayleigh.  “You’ve seen me make out with guys, and even if I did like women, I’d be comfortable with myself enough to admit it.”

“I’ve never said you only like women, Kay, just that you wouldn’t mind if a particularly pretty one asked you out.”

“You can’t just decide what people are like, Milly,” said Kayleigh, crossing her arms.  “Even if you have known them since third grade.”

“Oh, come on, Kay,” said Ziggy.  The Asian girl stepped out from behind Linda.  “If anyone knows whether you like girls, it’s going to be the one you take on dates.”

“Ah, screw you guys!”  With that, Kayleigh stormed off.  The afternoon crowds of the mall swirled around her.  She didn’t bother to look around to see if she recognized anyone in them, to concerned with her own problems to bother looking.  Lost in her irritation and thoughts, she couldn’t stop herself from running into somebody slowly meandering through the crowd.

“Oh, whoops, my bad,” said Kayleigh, sweeping a lock of her short, brown hair back into place.

“No, no, the fault is all mine,” said the other girl.  She took off her shades, and continued, “I just bought new sunglasses, and I was too eager to try them out.”

She was stunning.  Her pale, almost white skin was flawlessly smooth, a fact made all the more noticeable by the black hair framing her face.  Dark red lips stood out against her light face, matched in color by a pair of long-lashed eyes.  But the thing that caught Kayleigh’s attention the most was her light blue shirt and navy skirt.

“Wait a minute,” said Kayleigh, “That’s Darkwood’s uniform your wearing isn’t it?”

Jessica looked down at herself.  “Oh, yeah,” said the other girl, “I guess I was too lazy to really change after classes today, so I just dumped the jacket and tie in my dorm room.”

“Oh, don’t worry about it,” Kayleigh said, “It’s not like public school kids always have time to pick out an outfit after school either.  It’s just that I’ve never had a chance to talk to someone from Darkwood, even though I’ve lived in Desmond my entire life.  I’m Kayleigh, by the way.”

“I’m Jessica,” said the girl from the boarding school, offering her hand, “and it’s not just the normal people we’re reluctant to talk to.  The halls are practically silent between classes, just some murmuring between the students.  It’s like they’re afraid of somebody intruding on their conversation.”

“Oh, that must be hard for you,” said Kayleigh.  “You don’t even have sports to take your mind off of things, do you?”

“It’s not all bad,” said Jessica, “I’ve been able to talk to my roommate over…there…Oh, dear, I think I’m lost.”

Kayleigh patted Jessica shoulder.  “Yeah, the whole town’s hard to find your way around in.  Want me to help you find your way around?”

Jessica looked at the other girl, and smiled.  “Yeah, that’d be great!”


Emily sighed as she peered through the crowd.  Dammit, Jess, where did ya go?  Her roommate had wandered off while she was paying for her new sunglasses, and had probably gotten lost on accident.  Even if there was no malice in Jessica leaving, it was still a sign that things were Going Wrong.

Relax, Em.  ‘S not like anybody’s gonna start shootin’ at ya ’cause you look like someone else today.  Desmond was more of a town were people killed themselves than each other, and even if it wasn’t, she was wearing her school uniform.  Being a student of Darkwood Academy implied Things about her.

Steeling herself, Emily stepped out of the store and into the main area of the mall.  The space didn’t seem to be as twisted as it was around school, fortunately, which meant that it would be easier to use landmarks to find her way around.  That fountain with the rough stone pyramid in the middle would be a good one to start with.

“Worried about getting lost, frosh?”

Emily nearly felt her bones fly out of her skin.  She spun around to look at the girl who had spoken those words.  It was someone working the ice cream booth Emily had been passing by, about 15 or 16.  The fact that she had called Emily ‘freshman’ probably meant that she was a student at Darkwood, too.  “Sorry, miss, I don’ think we’ve ever really met.”

The girl raised her hat.  “The name’s Angelica.  We’ve seen each other around school, haven’t we?”

The blonde spikes and the red-and-black banded sleeves under her work uniform did ring a bell.  “Ah, yeah, now that you mention it, I do recognize ya.  Well, I suppose I am still findin’ my way around, but I think I can look after myself, so I’ll jus’ let ya get back ta work.”

Emily turned away as quickly as could be considered polite.  She might have just been bored, or even trying to be helpful, but the fact that this Angelica was a student at Darkwood meant that she was Occulted.  God knew what she was capable of.  And talking to someone you didn’t even have a class with?  The Occulted didn’t get that extroverted.

Emily nearly tripped.  She looked down, and there was a red-and-black banded tentacle wrapped around her ankle.  A red-and-black tentacle that lead back to the ice cream counter.

“Sorry, pitch bird,” said Angelica, “you caught me in a bad mood.”  She lifted up a piece of paper, showing some kind of picture on it.  Emily looked around, and saw that no one seemed to notice her, like she had simply disappeared from their minds.  A strange pattern formed in front of her eyes, diamond shapes expanding around her, and then, all was blackness.


Jessica ran her fingers through her black, black hair.  Standing next to her was making Kayleigh feel self-conscious.  She knew she wasn’t bad-looking, she never had any problems with her weight, and she only had the occasional zit, but she just looked so…normal next to Jessica.  She kept her brown hair short, chin-length, and she was still growing outward, even if she had stopped growing upward far too early for her tastes.

“This is where you bought your shades, right?”

Jessica looked into the store.  “Yeah.  Looks like my roommate left already.  Care to show me around more?”

And so, Kayleigh and Jessica went, arm in arm, through the building around the fountain with the pyramid rock, idly chatting about their schools.  As they rounded the corner into the food court, Kayleigh realized that she forgot to ask a rather important questions.  “So what does your roommate look like, anyway?”

“Oh, Emily’s rather easy to recognize,” said Jessica, “She’s got this spiky mullet thing going on with her hair, she’s got this weird, patchy skin, the way she walks kind of makes people uneasy, and she’s going to be wearing the boy’s uniform.”

Kayleigh took a moment to try to draw a picture in her head, and failed.  Instead, she asked about the last part of that description.  “So, uh, girls are allowed to wear the boy’s uniform, then?”

“Yeah, the only really hard and fast rule is that teacher’s aren’t allowed to wear the student’s uniform.”  Jessica paused for Kayleigh’s confusion.  “I don’t know why that’s a rule, either.”

“Have you seen our music teacher?  She looks younger than most of the students.”

Kayleigh looked up at the voice.  It belonged to a girl about her age, maybe a little older, working at one of the counters of the food court.  Sitting above the multicolored buckets of ice cream, she was wearing the dark blue, short sleeved shirt that came with her job, with red-and-black banded sleeves covering the part of her arms that her shirt didn’t.  She was also wearing a cap to go with that shirt, covering short, blonde hair.  When she looked up at the girls, Kayleigh saw the worker’s iridescent eyes, shifting from pink to blue to green.

“Oh, are you a Darkwood student, too?” asked Kayleigh.  “I didn’t think I’d meet two in one day.”

The girl smiled, and turned back to the paper in front of her.  It was up on counter, so Kayleigh couldn’t see what she was doing, but by how her pencil moved, she seemed to have been drawing.  Jessica said, “You know, I’ve seen you in the hallways, but I don’t think we’ve properly met.  I’m Jessica, by the way.”

“Angelica,” the worker said, nodding.  Before either of the other found something to say, Kayleigh jumped in.

“What’s that about your music teacher?”

Angelica shrugged.  “She’s tiny, looks about ten.  Don’t know what her deal is.”

Kayleigh turned to her new friend and said, “Wow, Jess, your school keeps getting weirder and weirder.”

“Uh, yeah,” said Jessica, “Anyway, Angelica, can you help us find someone?  Tall girl, boy’s uniform, has patchy skin and a mullet?”

“She came by here a while ago, actually.”  The blonde seemed to consider something for a moment.  “Actually, she went right into this picture.”

With that, she lifted up the picture she had been working on, and the world changed.  The food court was empty now, except for Kayleigh and Jessica on one side of the ice-cream counter, and the blonde worker on the other.  Kayleigh looked around, and it seemed that the doors to the mall just…didn’t open to anything.

Jessica pushed Kayleigh away from her, and held her clenched fists at her side.  “What the hell did you just do?”

“Nothing much,” said Angelica.  “Just a bit of magic.”

Kayleigh was utterly confused.  She wasn’t quite sure what had happened to all of the people, or what was up with the second mall, but Jessica seemed really angry for some reason.  Maybe they wouldn’t be able to get out?

Jessica snorted.  “If it’s magic shit your doing, you should leave the normal people out of it.”  She jerked her head at Kayleigh.  “At least let her go.”

“Nah,” said the blonde, “I’m not going to give you chance to leave with her.  Not until my friends show up, anyway.  Besides, you’re as much to blame for her being here as I am.”

“Don’t fuck with me!” screamed Jessica.  She jumped onto the counter, dug her fingers into Angelica’s arm, and pulled.  Kayleigh was horrified by the result.

“Ooh, temper temper,” said Angelica, backing up around the cash register.  “You’re not going to do yourself any favors by getting violent with me.  Especially not in front of-”  Angelica’s gaze had moved over to Kayleigh, and she noticed her stare.  She followed it the bloodless stump where her arm used to be attached.  “Ah, son of a bitch!”

She looked around, and found her arm lying on the ground some distance away.  Her other arm, the one still attached to her body, twisted and extended, becoming some kind of red-and-black banded tentacle, reaching out to grab the first.  Pulling it back to her, she pushed her arm back on to her stump.

Jessica stepped off of the counter.  “Hey, wait a minute.  You said something about Emily being in here, didn’t you?”

“Oh, she’s around,” said Angelica, flexing her fingers to make sure they worked right.  “Had to bring her in first so she could be a seed for the space to form– Dammit!”

Angelica slapped herself.  Jessica stalked forward, smiling at the blonde.  “Worried about letting something slip?  Well, if you don’t want to tell me, I suppose I’ll just have to ask your limbless stump.”

Kayleigh wasn’t sure what happened next.  She felt like Angelica had reached out to grab her from ten feet away, and then she was flying through the air and crashing into a store window.  She didn’t feel pain, she didn’t feel much of anything.  She was looking at her shoulder, and saw that shards of glass was poking through it.  Red blood was running down her arm, and she realized that her concussion was messing with her mind, and Jessica had come over to her, and there was the taste of blood in her mouth…

Suddenly, feeling returned to Kayleigh’s body.  Starting at the base of her head and running through the rest of her body, it was accompanied by the world exploding into a riot of color, blacks and reds and yellows, with a magenta haze surrounding Jessica.

Then, the pain stopped.  And the colors stopped, and Jessica checked Kayleigh’s eyes.  “Are you alright?  You’re not going to flip out and attack anyone, are you?  No craving for more blood?”

“Uh, no.”

“Okay, good,” said Jessica.  “Do you feel good enough to try moving around?  I honestly have no idea what effect my blood will have on you.”

Slowly, Kayleigh sat up.  She felt fine, her arms were moving like they should have, and her legs bent in the right places.  Looking down at herself, she saw that her clothes were covered in dust and bits of glass.  Worse, blood was still running down her arm.  Fortunately, the wound had closed, and she had worn a sleeveless top that day, leaving her arms bare, but is was still a mess.

“Oh, damn.  Hey, Jessie?”  The pale girl’s eyes snapped back to Kayleigh’s.  She had been watch the blood flow across the brunette’s skin.  “Can you help me clean this up?”

Jessica jumped onto Kayleigh, her mouth descending on the blood.  The sensation of the rough tongue on Kayleigh’s skin, the moans of pleasure echoing through the air, the weight pressing down on her, it was all…weirdly sexy.  Kayleigh didn’t want to think of it that way, but it was the only thing that came to mind.

Finally, Jessica lifted herself back up.  She was blushing and panting, but Kayleigh’s arm was completely clean.  Sitting there, in some kind of parallel universe with a girl that just lapped up her blood, Kayleigh’s brain finally caught up to her mouth.  “Are…are you a vampire?”

Jessica smiled, nervously, showing her sharp, elongated eyeteeth.  “Well, I’m…Occulted.  That’s what we usually call ourselves, anyway.”

“Holy shit, I’ve been hanging out with a corpse.”

Jessica glared at Kayleigh’s outburst.  “I’m not a corpse.  Look, I’ve got a pulse and everything, see?”

Jessica pushed two of Kayleigh’s fingers into her neck.  There was a pulse there, even if there was something off about it.  Like there was a second pulse, behind the first one.

“So,” said Kayleigh, pulling her fingers back, “what are you?”

“Like I said, I’m Occulted.”  Jessica stood up, and helped the other girl to her feet.  “Everyone at Darkwood is, actually.  As for what that means, well, all you really know is that actual magic is a thing, and that every monster from folklore has some basis in reality.”

“Wait, magic exist?” said Kayleigh.  “And you go to some kind of monster school?  Oh my god, my hometown has a goddamn monster school.  I’m going to…I’m not going to tell anyone about this, why am I not going to tell anyone about this?”

Kayleigh had grabbed a hold of Jessica’s arms.  Jessica had scrunched her eyebrows in confusion.  “I’m not sure what you mean?”

“There’s some kind of block in my mind,” said Kayleigh.  “It’s stopping me from even wanting to tell people about this.”

“Oh, well,” said Jessica, shaking Kayleigh off, “I honestly have no idea.  Telling normal people about myself just, never occurred to me, I guess.”

Shaking her head, Kayleigh changed the subject.  “Well, what about that Angelica girl, that trapped us in here?  What’s she?”

Jessica shrugged.  “I don’t know.  I’ve never even talked to her before today.”

“So what, she’s just shitting on you for no reason?” asked Kayleigh.  “Guess your school’s more normal than I thought.”

“I suppose somethings cross all boundaries,” said Jessica.  “But anyway, we need to find a way out of here.  Angelica said something about Emily being used as a seed for the space.”

“So,” said Kayleigh.  Jessica’s eyes snapped to her.  “Did this empty mall grow out of her like a plant, or…”

“Uh, no.”  Jessica reached up to scratch the back of her neck.  “I think that she just meant that the space needed something inside of it to grow around, like a seed crystal.  If we find Emily, we should be able to get out of here.  Let’s look for—AAAHH!”

Jessica jumped backward, through the window that Kayleigh was thrown through.  She was clutching her face, and by her breathing, she might have been crying.  Kayleigh went to her, stumbling over broken glass and scattered clothes to do so.  Placing her hand on Jessica’s arm, she managed to calm the vampire enough to reveal her face.

An angry red mark crossed her face.  Extending from the right of her forehead to her left cheek, flecks of skin were starting to peel off of it.  Blinking the tears away, Jessica said, “God, that bird is like the sun.”

Kayleigh raised her head and looked around.  “What bird?”

“The bird that just attacked me,” said Jessica, confused.  She got to her hands and knees, and crept to the window.  Cautiously, she lifted her head above the edge, and she looked at…something.  All Kayleigh could see was empty space.  “That thing is made out of aura.”

Kayleigh tried to see what Jessica was seeing.  “What do you mean, it’s made of aura?”

“I mean that it’s made out of the same stuff as those things that surround everything, that the Occulted use to do magic, that’s why you can’t see it.”

“So, what your saying is, this is some kind of magic thing?”

“Yes.”  Jessica sat down, her back to the window.  “Kayleigh?  We’re going to have to split up.”


Jessica felt bad about sending the normal girl off on her own, but hey, only one of them knew the mall’s layout.  Besides, an inert aura like Kayleigh’s would do jack and shit against something made of aura, even if she could see it.  Well, it had a power like the sun, so Jessica’s own aura would also fall inert if she got close, but it wasn’t like finding a way around that needed actual thought.

“Hey, asshole!” said Jessica, raising herself up from behind the window’s edge.  “Did you notice me, or has the sun burnt away what passed for your brain?”

It wasn’t the best taunt ever, but it got the thing’s attention.  Spreading its golden-feathered wings, it rose into the air, and dove with it’s talons forward.  Fortunately, with her eye on it and burning a little blood for her Reflexes, Jessica could track it easily as Kayleigh got out of the shop.  Just as the bird’s talons and sharp beak would have ripped through her Armor, the vampire used her Strength to leap out of the way.

“Come on, sun!  Are you a hawk or a slug?”

It was a better taunt, even if it was completely unnecessary.  The sun-bird was already giving Jessica its full attention, it yellow shape standing out against the riotous black and red aura of the space itself.  It was awkward on the ground, and its fumbling gave Jessica plenty of time to pick up a nearby manikin.

The manikin, like everything else Angelica’s sorcery had created, had its aura swirling around it, fully active and shoving against damn near everything else.  Just as the hawk seemed to be ready to take off, Jessica threw the dummy at it, using every ounce of her blood-powered Strength to make it sail as hard and as fast as possible.  The sun-bird didn’t have nearly enough time to dodge, of course, so it was broken by the manikin’s aura on impact, the aura that made up its body dissipating and reforming into a small, round egg.

Jessica didn’t let herself get too happy, though.  She remembered Angelica saying that her friends — plural — were going to show up.  That meant that whoever was controlling that bird, there were more of them running around, even if only one of them had shown up early.

Stepping outside, Jessica saw two more of the sun-birds flying towards her.  She grinned.  “Come one, come all,” she said, “come see Jessica Albright’s Thrown Crap Death Show!”


Kayleigh felt bad about leaving the vampire to face those things on her own, but hey, only one of them could actually see them.  Her task wasn’t much, Jessica had said to look for things that were different from the normal mall, and the pyramid in the fountain being smooth might have been the most obvious difference ever.

Kayleigh ran toward the fountain, vaguely aware of the sound of something thudding on the ground.  By the time she had made it to the water, Jessica was screaming something about some kind of ‘death show’ and hurling more crap into the air.  These didn’t arc naturally to the ground, instead, they hit something mid-flight, and dropped to the ground right there.

Kayleigh certainly hoped that the whatevers were being chased away from her, but there wasn’t much she could do if they weren’t.  To keep her mind off of that fact, she waded up to the shiny surface of the fountain’s rock.

It wasn’t her face that was looking back at her.  Instead, it belonged to someone wearing the Darkwood uniform, complete with navy blazer and gold striped tie, with spiky hair on the top of their head and trailing down the back of the jacket.  Their skin was a patchwork of browns, like they had received skin graphs from a dozen different people, with no attempt to match neighboring pieces.  It wasn’t difficult to realize that this was the face of Emily, Jessica’s roommate.

Alright, I’ve found her!  Now I can…something.

Kayleigh banged her forehead against the stone surface as she realized that they didn’t think that far ahead.  She had absolutely no idea how the reflection-prison-trap thing worked, whether Emily was in the pyramid itself or if it was just showing where she was.

“Ho!”  Jessica ran up to the side of the fountain, throwing things at invisible targets.  “Tell me you’ve found something.”

A thought occurred to Kayleigh.  “Hey, Jessie?  Can’t you like, feel Emily’s aura?”

“No, she doesn’t have one.”  Jessica threw a pole like a javelin.

“What!?  How!?”

“Well, it’s a bit complicated, but she isn’t really Occulted.  She’s only in Darkwood because–AAH!”  Jessica jumped out of the way of something.  She scrambled backwards, looking for something to pick up and throw, before finally deciding to tear up a chunk of the ground.  “Well, never mind that, have you found anything?”

Kayleigh sighed.  “Well, I’m seeing Emily reflected in this rock over here, but I don’t know what it means.”

Jessica had to dodge away for a bit, pick up a few things from around the mall and throwing them.  When she found time to get back to Kayleigh, she sucked her thumb and said, “Where are all these birds coming from?”  Looking around, Jessica stopped short when she realized she was next to Kayleigh.  “Oh, right, reflection.  Well, I guess it’s possible that girl would do something that obvi–oh, shit!”

Kayleigh screamed.  She had been picked up by a force unseen, carrying her away down the mall.  She saw Jessica reach out a hand after her, too late to do anything.  Helpless, Kayleigh watched as her friend shrank into the distance, her field of vision bouncing around as she went low across the floor.

Kayleigh screamed, frustration and powerlessness welling up her throat.  It looked like Jessica felt the same, standing there, only able to stare as the other girl was carried off.  Then, the vampire squared her shoulders, and jumped into the middle of the fountain.  Her fist crashed into the pyramid, shattering it, and then, the world began to break up.

“YER FUCKED, SHITS!”

That yell and screams like death were the last thing Kayleigh heard before the world broke open like an egg.  Then she was lying on the floor of the real mall, the people around her trying not to step on her as she got up.

“Hey, Kay!”

Milly was running up to her.  Behind her, Linda and Ziggy were discussing something that was happening in the direction of the fountain.  “What the hell is that?” said Ziggy.  “Just Darkwood kids being idiots, just ignore it,” said Linda.

“Woah, Kayleigh, are you okay?” said Milly, checking her friend over.

“I’ve been having a rough time, I suppose.”  Kayleigh didn’t feel like going into to much detail.  Her mind was too occupied by the thought of magic existing, and the fact that she wasn’t going to tell anyone about it.


“We lost three of us to your incompetence.”

Angelica backed away from the spirit’s anger, more because it was expected from her than because she was actually afraid.  The anger was sour, but the anguish causing it was fruity and just a bit sweet, so the overall effect was something like a green apple.  Except that it was an emotion, not food, so it was nothing like a green apple.

“Well, they knew the risks going in, didn’t they?” said Angelica, with her best fake-apology look.  “You knew what would happen if Emily got out.”

“Keeping the aberration contained was your job,” said the sun-bird, “And the only real risk we took was trusting the likes of you.”  With that, he took wing, and threw a mass of aura at the blonde.  This aura hit her own, and formed into a cross on her back, with all of the weight it would have if it was made of wood.  It would go away eventually, but in the meantime, Angelica was stuck dragging it around.

Sighing, she walked out of the trailer and into the alleyway.  She liked the alley, there were never any people around, and the only security camera was just for show.  It was one of the few places a girl could go to enjoy the air alone, which is why she was surprised when her arms and legs were ripped off.

Really, getting kicked in the gut was a pretty logical follow up to that.  “Hey there, nalt,” said the auraless thing standing over her.  Angelica had no idea how the hell Emily functioned without one, or how she could kill spirits, or much of anything else about her for that matter, but stuffing her in a box should have gotten the sun spirits to beat up Jessica, who would be a pretty good source of suffering, if Angelica could get her around to suffering, at any rate.

“‘Sup.  Want another place to chill out some time, cause I can totally set that up, ya know?”  The second kick was completely unsurprising.

“Nah.  This right here is just punishment for the normal girl.”  Emily had stoop down to start punching, but that last sentence was a confusing one.

“What?  What normal girl?”  A punch.

“The normal girl you sucked inta yer sorcery and almost killed.”  Second punch.  “We’re not gonna tell anyone ’bout that, gettin’ her out would be too hard ta explain.  Lucky you.”

As the pummeling continued, Angelica reached out her aura, looking for Jessica.  The vampire was standing a bit behind her roommate, worry rolling off of her like bitter chocolate.  She’s worried for someone else?  Why would she…oh, oh, she made that girl eat her blood.  I’m going to have to remember that for later.

“Now,” said Emily, “We’re gonna give you a limb back, and we’re gonna tell the teachers ’bout that other shit you pulled.”

“Wait, what?”

Emily shrugged and stood.  “Like I said, this shit’s jus’ fer the girl.  Trappin’ us in sorcery, sending somebody ta attack Jessica?  That shits another thing entirely.  If you don’t wan’ anybody ta know you were almos’ a murderer today, I think you should be ready to tell people you fell down the stairs.”

Angelica let out a pained laugh.  “Are you really-”

Kick.  “You.  Fell down.  The stairs.”

Reluctantly, Angelica nodded and said, “I fell down the stairs.”

“Good.  Let’s go, Jess.”  The two girls turned to leave.  The school would be pissed at her, true, but it wasn’t anything she couldn’t recover from.  As Angelica wiggled toward her nearest limb, she giggled at the fact that Jessica had a potential moroi running around somewhere.  That was going to cause her some headaches, even before Angelica made things worse.

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So, this is the first chapter of the rewrite.  It’s gotten out of hand, it’s long, with every word seeming necessary, rather than meandering, it’s mostly told from the point of view of a character I created to have things explained to her, but might be able to carry her own story, and it took me nearly three weeks to write, counting the rough draft.  I’m going to need some time to think about what I want to do, so don’t be surprised if I post some musings instead of stories over the next few weeks.

Occulted: Initiation (Rough Draft)

She was artificially beautiful.  Modifying a photograph to remove the flaws of the subject was a practice as old as photography itself, but did ‘artificial’ mean ‘fake?’  Art itself is the creation of human hands, and it is, in many ways, the process by which civilization comes to define beauty.  But there was no work of beautiful work of art that ignored its medium.  And if her face could be considered part of the picture’s medium, would the image manipulation be ignoring it?

Regardless, Kayleigh had spent far too long staring at the poster.  Her friends had wandered off somewhere, probably because they had gotten bored of her staring.  Sweeping a short lock of brown hair over her ear, Kayleigh turned to find them, and was nearly knocked over.

Stumbling backward, Kayleigh looked at the other person.  The girl was pale, making her long black hair and dark red lips all the more striking.  She took her shades off her sweeping nose, revealing eyes nearly the same color as her mouth.

“Sorry about that,” the girl said, “I just bought new sunglasses, and I guess I was a bit to eager to try them out.  I’m Jessica, by the way.”

“Ah, Kayleigh.”  The short-haired girl offered her hand.  As they shook, Kayleigh looked over Jessica’s clothes.  The light blue blouse and midnight skirt was something Kayleigh had seen around town.  “You’re from Darkwood?”

“Ah, yeah,” said Jessica.  “I was to lazy to actually change after class, but at least I ditched the tie and jacket.”

“Oh, no worries,” Kayleigh said, waving it off.  “I get it, I get it.  It’s just that you people usually keep to yourselves.  I mean, I’ve lived here my entire life and this is the first I’ve ever talked to one of you.”

“Well,” said Jessica, coming in close to whisper into Kayleigh’s ear, “The truth is, we don’t talk to each other that much, either.  The hallways between class almost sound like a library.”

“Really?” said Kayleigh.  “That sounds really creepy.  And lonely.”  This is awkward, I need to get moving.  “Well, I should be looking for my friends, but if you want someone to talk to, I guess we could walk together.”

“Really?  Thank you.”  With that, the girls wandered out into the crowd.  They walked through the mall, reaching the area just behind the food court, seeing the fountain in the middle of it,with a large triangular rock in the middle of the basin.  As people, teenagers and families, swirled about them, Jessica turned to Kayleigh and asked, “You’re a student at the public school, then?”

“Yeah, what about it?.”

“Tell me about it.”  Jessica dodged around a passing knot of people.  “I’ve already told you something weird about my school.”

“It’s a school,” said Kayleigh.  “There isn’t anything weird or interesting about it.  You ever been to a public school?”  True, the girls family was obviously loaded, what with the private school tuition and all, but it wouldn’t hurt to ask.

“Up until last year, actually,” said the pale girl, “but that was middle school, so that’s an entirely different world, yeah?”

“Oh, so you’re a freshman, too.  There’s something we have in common.”  Kayleigh paused for a moment.  “Why’d you’re parents send you to boarding school, anyway?”

Jessica glanced away.  “Public school, just, wasn’t working out for me.  I don’t really want to talk about it, but it’s not like it wasn’t my choice.”

“And all the more fool of you for it.”  These words came from somewhere to the side.  A girl manning one of the food court’s counters, with strange, color-shifting eyes and short blonde hair under her hat spoke them.  She was drawing something in a notebook in front of her, black and red sleeves covering her arms.

“Uh, what?” said Jessica.

“Oh, nothing much, Surfacer,” said the blonde, “just that you made a horrible decision to come to a dumping ground like ours.”

Jessica’s eyes tightened, and she said with a polite smile, “I thank you for your advice, but I think I can judge my decisions for myself.”

The blonde leaned back and admired her work.  “If you get to close to a picture, you can’t see all of the details, you know?” she said.  For the first time she actually looked at Jessica, with eyes that were enjoying her suffering.  “You might want to ask someone farther away.  Your roommate, perhaps?”

Jessica’s eyes widened, and she turned and left.  Kayleigh ran after her.  “Hey, hey!  Who was that girl, and what was that about your roommate?”

Jessica ran through a beam of sunlight, and winced.  “I don’t know who she is,” the girl said, turning back toward Kayleigh.  “I’ve seen her around school, but this is the first time I’ve ever talked to her.”

“So she’s shitting on you for no reason?  I guess your school’s more normal than it seems.”

“Guess so.  But, my roommate?  I don’t like how that girl talked about her.”

“And?”

“And I want to find her- huh?”  A beam of light was shining is Jessica’s eyes.  Both Jessica and Kayleigh turned to look at the source, and they saw the blonde girl holding up her notebook, showing a picture.  And then the world disappeared.

It was replaced by an empty version of the mall, save for Kayleigh, Jessica, and the blonde girl.  “Ah, so I got the normal girl, too?  Oh well,” said the blonde.

Kayleigh stepped forward, and shouted, “Hey, who the hell are you, and where did everybody go?”

“Ah, how rude of me.”  The blonde made this awful, condescending bow.  “Angelica, at your service.  And everybody else is should be right were they were, considering that I didn’t invite them into my domain, like I did you.”

“Okay, so Angelica,” said Jessica, jumping out in front of her companion, “You’ve, ah, you’ve got me over the barrel here, so to speak.  I’m not sure what you’ve got in mind, now, but maybe you could start with what happened to Emily?”

“You mean your roommate?” Angelica asked.  “Well, she should be around here somewhere, and for what I want you to do, oh, give it a few minutes here.”

“Don’t fuck with me!” screamed Jessica, lunging the blonde.  Angelica moved out of the way, seemingly unconcerned with the damage she had taken.  “Ah, ah, ah,” Angelica said.  “If you hurt me to much, you might not be able to leave, you know?”

Kayleigh stared.  Angelica noticed, and said, “What’s gotten into you- ah, crap.”  Angelica had followed Kayleigh’s gaze, and finally noticed that her arm was no longer attached to her body.  Looking around, she found the arm some distance away from her, and she calmly walked over and shoved it back onto her bloodless stump.

“Why are you doing this?” asked Jessica.

“I guess you just caught me in a bad mood,” said Angelica, “something cutting off my arm didn’t help with.”

Jessica scowled.  “You think your in a bad mood now?  Well, it’s going to get worse now that I know to avoid your limbs.”

Kayleigh wasn’t sure what happened next.  She felt like Angelica had reached out to grab her from ten feet away, and then she was flying through the air and crashing into a store window.  She didn’t feel pain, she didn’t feel much of anything.  She was looking at her shoulder, and saw that shards of glass was poking through it.  Red blood was going to stain her jacket, and she realized that her concussion was messing with her mind, and Jessica had come over to her, and there was the taste of blood in her mouth…

Suddenly, feeling returned to Kayleigh’s body.  Starting at the base of her head and and running through out her body, it was accompanied by the world exploding into a riot of color, blacks and reds and yellows, with a magenta haze surrounding Jessica.

Then, the pain stopped.  And the colors stopped, and Jessica checked Kayleigh’s eyes.  “Are you alright?  You’re not going to flip out and attack anyone, are you?  No craving for more blood?”

Kayleigh was entranced by the sparkles in Jessica’s pupils.  “You’re…really pretty.”

“Oh, um, thank you,” said Jessica.  “Do you feel good enough to try moving around?  I honestly have no idea what effect my blood will have on you.”

Kayleigh tried to sit up, and then to stand up.  That done, she tried to do some stretches, only slightly bothered by the damage on her jacket’s shoulder.  “So, uh, that was your blood I tasted?”

“Uh, yeah, blood’s potent stuff, especially my blood, of course yours smells absolutely delicious…”

Both stopped as they realized what Jessica had just said.  “Are, are you a vampire?” asked Kayleigh.

Jessica smiled, showing of unusually long eyeteeth that she didn’t have a minute ago.  “I’m…Occulted.  That what we usually call ourselves, anyway.  Look, all you really need to know is that magic exists, and the people that can use it tend to resemble monsters from pop culture and folklore.”

“Seriously?  That’s awesome.  I’m going to…”  Kayleigh’s eyes widened as she realized something very important.  “I’m not going to tell anyone about this.  Why am I not going to tell anyone about this?”

Jessica shrugged.  “That’s just the way magic is.  It’s a secret, and even people that don’t know about it are keeping it.”

Jessica turned back to the middle of the empty mall.  “Anyways, we need to– OW!”  Jessica stumbled backward, into Kayleigh.  An angry red stripe, like a sunburn, crossed her face.  “Sunnava bitch.  That felt like the sun.”

Kayleigh looked around Jessica, and saw nothing of note.  “What was it?”

Jessica looked over her shoulder.  “It was that giant bird.  Can’t you see it?”

“No, all I see is the fountain.  Maybe it’s some magic thing that normal people can’t see?”

Jessica drew her eyebrows together.  “Well, maybe?  I mean, the only thing I know of that works like that is aura, but I guess that there could be other things…”

“Uh, Jessie?” said Kayleigh, “aren’t you supposed to be the one that knows about these things?”

The black haired girl grimaced.  “So I’m still learning.  But, if somebody actually caused this, that should mean that they understand the rules behind it.  All we have to do is figure them out.”

“So, how do we do that?”

“My roommates probably near the core of all of this.  Look for something that’s out of place, or at least different from the real world.”

“You mean like how that rock in the middle of the fountain is smooth now?”

Jessica stopped to look at the rock.  Apparently, the difference wasn’t as obvious to someone that had seen that rock for years.

“Yeah, that probably important.  We should probably go over there and– OH SHIT!”

Jessica was picked up and carried off by an invisible force.  Kayleigh watched as she was picked up and thrown to another part of the mall.  Realizing that there wasn’t much she could do for the vampire, Kayleigh ran to the fountain with the smooth rock.  As she waded into the knee deep water, she looked down, and saw someone chained their.

That person had black hair and patchy, multicolored skin.  There were tubes going up her nose, and needles stuck in her arms.  She grabbed a hold of Kayleigh, and barely pulling herself above the surface of the water, uttered, “Break…the…center.”

Before anything else could be said, Kayleigh felt herself being pulled away by something.  That thing didn’t hold her for long, letting her go and dropping her to the floor.  She managed to roll, avoiding most of the pain, and only righted herself to see Jessica brandishing a counter like a weapon.

It seemed to be helping.  She seemed to be knocking away whatever it was that was attacking her, but when Kayleigh tried to go to her, she felt herself being pushed back by an invisible something.  She felt like it was something that needed to chase her to grab her, somehow.  It was a long shot, but that jacket was ruined anyway, so she took it off, revealing her bare shoulders, and threw it into the whatever’s range.  It worked, Kayleigh got much farther this time, close enough that she could try to calling out to Jessica.

“THE STONE! BREAK THAT SMOOTH STONE!”

Jessica heard her.  The counter sailed through the air, crashing into the rock and breaking it to pieces.  Suddenly, Kayleigh was surrounded by people.  The world had returned to normal, and it was like Kayleigh hadn’t just been sucked into a parallel where she had almost died.

“Yo, Kay!” cried Milly.  She and Ziggy were running up to her, while Linda looked over at something, worried.  “Where’d you go?”

“Ah,” said Kayleigh, “just lost in my own thoughts.”  Kayleigh would be amazed if they bought it.  But she was more concerned with that magic existing, and the fact that she wasn’t going to tell anyone about it.


Barely finished this one in time.  It already needs to be rewritten, but that’s what happens when I deal with character’s that haven’t fermented in my brain for years.  I’m not quite sure what I’m going to do for next week, but I think I’m going to need a lot of thought for this.